Hi guys! This is my post for the TBFN hosted by So Sugar Sweet. I am on Team Lions!
These are the prompts I used: (In order)
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All right, here goes nothing 🙂 (NOTE: This is a dialogue story. This is my first time attempting one so it’s not the greatest, but I am proud of it because it’s my first time.)
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“The end.”
“The end? What do you mean, the end?”
“I mean the end.”
“That’s your story? Your whole story?”
“The whole 15 years of it.”
“Up ’till now?”
“Up till now.”
“But… what about the boy? What happened to him?”
“I think I broke him.”
“Rudy…”
“What, John. You think I’m sick? You’re not the first. Besides, I’m not sick, I’m twisted. Sick makes it sound like there’s a cure.”
“So you’re saying you want to be human? Like, 100% actually human? I’ve heard scary things about them. If you ask me, that’s not a cure, it’s getting sicker.”
“No worse then what I did to the boy. I hate being an Imaginary. I hate it! I don’t want to break people! I’d rather be a human & get broken then an Imaginary and break them.”
“Rue…”
“Don’t call me that. That was my mother’s name. I hate her. She’s the reason he’s broken.”
“Rudy, calm down. Stop pacing, you’re wearing out the new carpet. Dry your tears. Don’t wring your hands, we’ll fix this. ”
“But what if we can’t?”
“…”
“Why did you gasp?”
“I thought I heard something. If it’s the HG of US, we’re done. Quick, get me a tissue. If they ask, we’re fine.”
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“I can’t believe the Human Government took took us in for questioning!”
“Y-y-yeah. Me neither.”
“I don’t know how they found us in that old cabin. It was in the middle of nowhere!”
“I-I know.”
“John? What’s wrong?”
“I want to go home.”
“And I want to go to the moon. It ain’t happening sweetheart. Try to accept that.”
“How can you quote Samantha Lion to me right now, Rue? We’re in a police station.”
“I told you, don’t call me that.”
“Don’t you get it? Me calling you Rue is the least of our worries. We are in a police station. A police station! We’re 15 years old!”
“Mother didn’t care about age when she made me break him.”
“Look, I am sorry that you broke him. But you didn’t even know him! So, please get over it so we can get out of here?”
“Don’t you get it? You’re the goody-goody reverse. You’ve never broken anybody. You don’t understand the price that comes with our power.”
“What’s this ‘price’ you’re talking about?”
“You really don’t get it, do you? If you did, you would’t have that arrogance in your tone.”
“Just say it already!”
“When I broke him, I broke me too.”
“AAAAH!”
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I hope you liked it! I will see you tomorrow with a Camp NaNo update!
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liv 🙂
Ooh, I love that it was an all-dialogue story! I’ve only read a couple of those and it made it very interesting! The prompts were overall blended very well, and it sounds pretty intriguing. I’m not really sure what a Reverse is, but it makes me curious… Good job!
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I love how all the prompts were so perfectly blended into the story. 😉
Keep it up, Team Lions!
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Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you liked it
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Very intriguing! 😀
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Thank you! 🙂
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